updates.

[silc.git] / doc / draft-riikonen-silc-pp-04.nroff

diff --git a/doc/draft-riikonen-silc-pp-04.nroff b/doc/draft-riikonen-silc-pp-04.nroff
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--- a/doc/draft-riikonen-silc-pp-04.nroff
+++ b/doc/draft-riikonen-silc-pp-04.nroff
@@ -2653,17 +2653,18 @@ directly connected to the server.
 
 Routers form a ring in the SILC network.  However, routers may have other
 direct connections to other routers in the network too.  This can cause
-interesting routing problems in the network.  Since the network is ring,
+interesting routing problems in the network.  Since the network is a ring,
 the packets usually should be routed into counter clock-wise direction,
 or if it cannot be used then always clock-wise (primary route) direction.
 Problems may arise when a faster direct route exists and router is routing
-a channel messages.  Currently channel messages must be routed either
+a channel message.  Currently channel messages must be routed either
 in upstream or downstream, they cannot be routed to other direct routes.
 The SILC protocol should have a shortest path discovery protocol, and some
-existing routing protocol, that can handle a ring network with other direct
-routes inside the ring (hybrid ring-mesh network), MAY be defined to be
-used with the SILC protocol.  Additional specifications MAY be written
-on the subject.
+existing routing protocol, that can handle a ring network with other
+direct routes inside the ring (so called hybrid ring-mesh topology),
+MAY be defined to be used with the SILC protocol.  Additional
+specifications MAY be written on the subject to permeate this 
+specification.
 
 
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